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Yes, it’s time for
another Word Constructions newsletter – actually its past time and I
apologise for that!
As I mentioned last month, I attended the
Business Mums Conference in Melbourne as both presenters and
attendee (see the review below). In the end, I actually presented
twice and joined a forum panel so it was a busy weekend for me. By
being a presenter, I not only got to share some of my knowledge with
conference attendees but also gained new clients and had my notes in
the conference handbook – giving me further exposure to people who
didn’t attend my sessions. Of course, presenting is not something
everyone wants to do or is able to do well, but it is a great
exercise in promoting your business and building your credibility if
you can mange it.
Use your words wisely,
Tash
P.S. I am working towards some articles on taking leave from your
business so it isn’t too late to send me your thoughts and
experiences with leave. And next month I will formally announce what
maternity leave I am taking, or at least planning to take as you
never know with a baby!
Tash Hughes 0428 376 110 fax 03 9445
9154
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Clarity of mind means clarity of passion, too; this
is why a great and clear mind loves ardently and sees distinctly
what it loves.
- Blaise Pascal
Conference review
By Tash Hughes of
Word
Constructions
The second
Business Mums Conference was held in July 2008 and attended by a
positive group of self-employed people, mostly women. As much as I
valued the first conference, I felt that this one was more
interactive and certain aspects were more business-like. For
instance, the accompanying expo this year had a stronger business
focus than last year and the forums focused on business information
and tips rather than personal stories.
One of the great values of a conference such as this is the
opportunity to mix with other people who understand some of the
issues you face as a small
business owner. That doesn’t mean we stood there comparing our
battle wounds, but rather had a common understanding to work from
and share ideas and tips to make things simpler.
Some of the quick tips I gained from the weekend are:
- Don’t finish today until you have planned tomorrow
- Focus on relaxing rather than reducing stress (a play of
words, but it can have a huge impact)
- Create a default diary – and stick to it (that is, have set
times for tasks such as marketing, accounts, planning, reading and
reviewing processes)
- Don’t reference spam or privacy acts in your emails as it
can count against you with spam filters!
- Keep track of your finances – not just your bank balance
- “I know” stops learning and listening so ban it from your
vocabulary
By having a number of sessions in a day, each lasting 75 minutes or
so, the conference was able to cover many topics to help business
owners – and given that sole traders in particular have to be a jill-of-all-trades,
that variety is a wonderful bonus to any business event I attend.
Online study can be a good way to fit it in amongst other
commitments, like a business!
Adding Headings
By Tash Hughes of
Word
Constructions
Most of us take
headings on articles and blog posts for granted, but they are an
important part of the writing process. Let’s face it, busy people
will use a heading or title to decide whether or not to read the
article so the lack of heading would be a real problem.
A heading also makes
the article look complete – a book, article, news story or whatever
without a heading just wouldn’t have the same impact, or be as
easily discussed with others.
So we’ve established
that a heading is crucial, but how do we get a suitable heading for
our writing?
Choosing headings
Marketing people will
tell you the heading needs to grab attention, and it does. However,
be careful to use headings that are meaningful as well as attention
grabbing.
Here are some tips for
creating a heading for your next written work:
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Make it
relevant to the article itself – a misleading heading may grab
attention but will annoy people
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Keep it as
short as possible – headings introduce rather than tell the story
and there often isn’t enough space for a long heading
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Follow general writing rules – that is, use good spelling and
appropriate grammar. Note a heading does not have to be a complete
sentence so some grammar rules don’t apply to headings
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Be specific
so people know you are covering what they want to read about. For
example, I could call this article ‘writing tips’ or ‘labelling’ but
those terms are quite broad and don’t fully describe the specific
aspect of writing I am writing about
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Check for
double or hidden meanings as they are easy to create in short text.
For instance, ‘women super low’ could easily be interpreted as
saying women are feeling bad when it was actually about women have
low superannuation balances.
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Try for
originality and interest – these are more attention grabbing than
using certain words that hundreds of other people are using
For more information about dealing with headings as a useful tool
and how to use them,
the rest of the article can be found here.

Pay for business services with your products/services instead of cash -
could be very useful as a small business...
Poor examples
Sometimes, the easiest
way to learn the correct way to do something is to see it done
poorly. In this section of my newsletter, I show you some
real-life examples of writing that needs a little, and
sometimes a lot, help.
I
found the following example in a blog post dated some time ago.
example:
Start a % SYSTEM
example if your a
single parent of two children
with your pension +
ftb + rent assistance…
Issues with this
example:
Where do I start with this one? It doesn’t make sense, it isn’t
clear if it should be one sentence or many, and has grammatical
errors throughout.
So, the text needs to be on one line in a normal fashion or use some
punctuation to show that they are different sentences and
paragraphs. If we consider it as a heading and an example (which is
being generous frankly), the second line should start with “For
example, …” or formatted so that the example stands out as separate
from the sentence (like example:)
What is a “% System” anyway? I read the entire piece and I still
don’t know! If you are introducing a concept or system, explain
first and then give examples, and make sure the name is clear – I
seriously thought the % sign was a typo rather than part of the
name. {As a side note, a friend just suggested that perhaps it
should be a $ system – that makes much more sense!}
Although they sound the same,
the words your and you’re have very
different meanings. Your means you own something; you’re means you
are. So the above sentence implies you own a single parent of two
instead of being one!
Within a sentence, it is better to use words rather than symbols
like +; in a formula or calculation, a + may be appropriate. And
there is an assumption that readers know what ftb stands for – FTB
could mean fringe benefits tax or family tax benefit for many
Australians.
And then there is the huge assumption that a single parent lives on
a pension and rent assistance rather than working and/or paying a
mortgage.
A better version would
be: (without changing the meaning)
Start a Dollar
System
By understanding
where your money goes, it is easier to manage it. For example, if
you are a single parent living on a pension, family tax benefit and
rent assistance, …
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