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                                                Business 
                        Documents 
                        
                        by Tash Hughes of
                        Word 
                        Constructions 
                         When running a 
                        small business, time is limited and there are many tasks 
                        to be done. Most business owners understand the 
                        importance of appearing professional and making a good 
                        first impression. 
                         However, 
                        business owners don’t always remember that anything they 
                        write and give to potential clients is also part of 
                        their presentation. Thus, it is essential to make your 
                        documents professional too. 
                         The following 
                        tips apply to documents as simple as a quote or order 
                        and as complex as a tender or annual report. 
                        Spelling and 
                          Grammar 
                         Word processing 
                        packages will spell check your work for you, and 
                        everyone therefore expects your work to be perfect in 
                        this regard. Don’t forget, though, a spelling or typing 
                        error can be missed by spell check so a manual check is 
                        a must. 
                         For instance, 
                        spell check will accept “quiet short” instead of “quite 
                        short” or “the boy” instead of “the buoy,” yet they mean 
                        very different things.  
                         This sentence 
                        was in a recent newsletter: “Thank yuo all for your 
                        patients during this time.” It had nothing to do with 
                        medical clients, by the way, but that’s what it says... 
                        A little more effort would have produced a more 
                        professional newsletter for clients. 
                        Accuracy 
                         Ensure that 
                        everything you write is accurate – if in doubt, leave it 
                        out or qualify it. 
                         For example, 
                        “we expect delivery to take two weeks but will inform 
                        you of any delays” is better than “they will arrive in 
                        two weeks” if you are unsure. 
                         Take particular 
                        care to be accurate about your clients – don’t call them 
                        the wrong name or misspell a name, as that will be 
                        remembered more than your words. 
                         Also, be 
                        careful not to generalise – avoid words like all, 
                        every, never, best and only as they can be 
                        easily proven wrong. 
                        Repetition of 
                          meaning 
                         There is no 
                        need to call a snow white or a snail slow, and to do 
                        so makes the writer seem silly and ignorant. 
                         Common examples 
                        of this are “at this moment in time”, “ new 
                        innovations”, “the one single reason”, “an added bonus” 
                        and “9am in the morning.” 
                         I saw a 
                        newsletter the other day where the editor wrote “by 
                        yours truly … me” and it made her appear stupid and 
                        lowered the credibility of all she went on to say. 
                         This can also 
                        expand to obvious explanations, such as “had a smile on 
                        her face” (where else would a smile be?) and “looked up 
                        at the sky” (the sky is obviously up.) 
                        Make sense 
                         If the words 
                        and ideas don’t move from point to point in such a way 
                        to be clearly understood, a reader will have to work 
                        hard and become discouraged. Aim for simple sentences 
                        and don’t include irrelevant information. 
                        A simple test 
                        for checking if your words make sense is to read them 
                        aloud – your eyes may miss an error, but your ears won’t 
                        - or read it backwards. 
                        Be 
                          appropriate 
                         The use of form 
                        letters is acceptable, but make sure they are not overly 
                        general or unsuitable for some clients. 
                         I once received 
                        a form letter from my old school, which was obviously 
                        written with school parents in mind as it discussed 
                        “helping your child develop.” It was irrelevant to me 
                        and prevented me donating as they wished. 
                         Your choice of 
                        language is also important. Using technical terms and 
                        difficult words may show you have a great vocabulary, 
                        but will stop many people understanding what you’ve 
                        written. Likewise, using the latest slang and street 
                        language is likely to upset an older conservative 
                        reader. 
                         Each business 
                        and each document needs to be written to suit the 
                        audience. However, it is never appropriate to use 
                        swearing and derogative terms in business documents. 
                         It is also not 
                        appropriate to say negative things about competitors – 
                        apart from possible legal problems, it is unprofessional 
                        and unappealing. 
                        Always, always 
                        proof read your writing before it becomes public. If 
                        unsure, then get someone else to check it as well. 
                        For important 
                        documents or ones to be used repetitively, consider 
                        having a professional writer or editor help you. The 
                        benefits may astound you.   
                        Tash Hughes is 
                        the owner of Word Constructions and assists businesses 
                        in preparing all written documentation and web site 
                        content. Tash also writes parenting and business articles for 
                        inclusion in newsletter and web sites. 
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